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Falling

Posted by Deadtest - February 8th, 2009

I'm falling off the railing,
You let go of my hand,
Kicked me off at first,
So why would I want you to save me?

I'm falling in the ocean,
Nothing and no one to save me,
A blow so intence to the water it could break spines,
Parilyzed it seems,
Could no one save me?

I'm drowning,
Then I see a face blurred to the point of being un able to know,
I grab it's hand,
It pulls me out of the cold, wet grave.

That hand was yours,
You save a life you almost took,
You could've let me suffer,
Best friends never let us suffer alone.

Who knew your best friend could almost be your killer?

Falling

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2ndFoxChild 2009-02-09 01:07:37

holy shit that is really really deep

Deadtest 2009-02-09 01:07:37

Thank you my freind...
Do you write poetry?

2ndFoxChild 2009-02-09 01:30:53

me write poems well sometimes it's really rare

Deadtest 2009-02-09 01:30:53

What is the last poem you wrote?

2ndFoxChild 2009-02-09 01:35:05

I think it's somewhere in my notes I wrote it for this one guy that had special problems..............you want me too read it don't you

Deadtest 2009-02-09 01:35:05

If you do not mind, yes I would love to hear it...

2ndFoxChild 2009-02-09 01:48:30

I fell down to hard to reach the top dirt kicked in my face with no friends on my side so many decisions it's so very hard I've spilled over the cup but, will never give up *sigh*

Deadtest 2009-02-09 01:48:30

Very beautiful :)

2ndFoxChild 2009-02-09 02:11:32

Some other good ones I have is there is always light after the darkest days.Also, we met we danced we kissed we've laughed now that we break you go you laugh I'm sad I cry I moan I die but what I didn't know is that I could be hurt but now that you're gone I will never forget but I must move on.

Deadtest 2009-02-09 02:11:32

You, my friend, are a very good poet :)

royalsaint117 2009-02-09 17:09:03

silly...

Deadtest 2009-02-09 17:09:03

It's not supposed to sound silly!

cmgg 2009-02-09 17:40:11

WOOW!
can i be your manager, you will be more famous than einem!
Nice poem

Deadtest 2009-02-09 17:40:11

Who me or 2ndFox?

2ndFoxChild 2009-02-09 22:58:57

are you there

Deadtest 2009-02-09 22:58:57

Yes I am here :D

2ndFoxChild 2009-02-09 23:11:37

quick to my post please

Deadtest 2009-02-09 23:11:37

Yes sir!!! :D

2ndFoxChild 2009-02-09 23:40:44

LMAO I saw that you put Killer Queen
ah test what else do you listen to

Deadtest 2009-02-09 23:40:44

I have soooo many fave bands :D

2ndFoxChild 2009-02-09 23:51:15

have you heard of metallica

Deadtest 2009-02-09 23:51:15

HELLZ FUCKING YEA!!!!
I LUV METALICA!!!!

2ndFoxChild 2009-02-10 00:02:18

And you love Metallica could you get any cooler
can you

Deadtest 2009-02-10 00:02:18

I dunno...
What are 3 more bands you like?
I like AC DC, Black Sabbath, and Aerosmith....
Your three are?

2ndFoxChild 2009-02-10 00:35:16

Well there's Linkin Park, System of a Down, and ACDC.

Deadtest 2009-02-10 00:35:16

I love those bands TOO!!!!
:D HELLZ YEA!

2ndFoxChild 2009-02-10 00:56:46

HOLY SH## YOUR HOT *clears throat*Mckena
and you like the same bands too
XP now YOUR MY BEST FRIEND:song by Queens

Deadtest 2009-02-10 00:56:46

Thank you *clears throat*David :)
Hellz yea and I like many more :D
I will listen to that song!!!!

illbeyourvampire 2009-02-10 20:22:10

cool/

Deadtest 2009-02-10 20:22:10

Thx dude :)

cmgg 2009-02-10 20:31:56

god damn!
if there was a handrail you would not faill
''avaricious government who does not spend a cent in his state''
=D
i re-replyed

Deadtest 2009-02-10 20:31:56

No I was holding on a hand rail practicaly dangling and it seemed she was going to help me back up even though she pushed me off and she threw me of the rail and I fell 10 feet under water so she saved me before I drowned...

Falling

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